My idea please review V2

I scrapped the original story in favor for this....
The mages circle is meeting again after 10 years in the white dragon mountain. But all is not well the night of the meeting the a group named the 7th circle kills the magir the leader of the mages. The remaining mages must decide which side to align with i will post history soon and for the world. if anyone has history ideas for the world that would be great! thank you FFF
-with love

you're more then welcome to start an RPG if you'd like but, go into a little more detail. Like the backgrund story etc. (just edit it when you have time) i'll approve of it and then members can join. Until then please elaborate

Also give it a title

You can also do that in the editing post

I wish I could remember the who all I used to be in a Final Fantasy RPG with on IMVU, I'd send em this way and they would be able to more than likely help fill in the gaps.. T T god I hate lengthy down periods where you forget the vast majority of your online friends..