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The Key (poem)
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The Key (poem)
The Key
With each passing moment, the clock ticks.
Slower and slower. Just staring at the clock
With my mind full of thoughts--Too many questions--Too many what if's. Too long.
Pacing back and forth simultaneously, I begin to panic--
My thoughts are taking over. Flooding my whole entire body. Shut down.
Restart? No- No i will not allow myself i've come too far--We've come too far. But--What if?
My downfall. The reason I can't move forward. The reason for my doubts. The reason? Is you.
Difficult this has been. We've come so far only to be handed this obstacle-- The obstacle,
If not taken care of properly will determine our future--
The future we planned from the start-- Where it began--
The promises we made each other--
The key. The key is strength.
If not strong, it will not last.
Not because we don't love each other.
But, because of you.
Slower and slower. Just staring at the clock
With my mind full of thoughts--Too many questions--Too many what if's. Too long.
Pacing back and forth simultaneously, I begin to panic--
My thoughts are taking over. Flooding my whole entire body. Shut down.
Restart? No- No i will not allow myself i've come too far--We've come too far. But--What if?
My downfall. The reason I can't move forward. The reason for my doubts. The reason? Is you.
Difficult this has been. We've come so far only to be handed this obstacle-- The obstacle,
If not taken care of properly will determine our future--
The future we planned from the start-- Where it began--
The promises we made each other--
The key. The key is strength.
If not strong, it will not last.
Not because we don't love each other.
But, because of you.
Comments and Critic is welcome!
-LadyE =]
Last edited by LadyE on Wed Dec 01, 2010 6:40 pm; edited 1 time in total
LadyE- Admin
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Re: The Key (poem)
This is really good! (:
You never told me you wrote poetry!!!
Is the "you" not a specific person or what?
You never told me you wrote poetry!!!
Is the "you" not a specific person or what?
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Re: The Key (poem)
Thank you so much, I try
Do you want me to explain it?
Do you want me to explain it?
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Lover- Global Mod
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Re: The Key (poem)
You really like writing about your boy eh E?
but your really talented at this shit. It really flows and i like your style.
Keep it up.
but your really talented at this shit. It really flows and i like your style.
Keep it up.
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