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Post by LadyE Tue Nov 30, 2010 11:47 pm

The Key

With each passing moment, the clock ticks.
Slower and slower. Just staring at the clock
With my mind full of thoughts--Too many questions--Too many what if's. Too long.
Pacing back and forth simultaneously, I begin to panic--
My thoughts are taking over. Flooding my whole entire body. Shut down.
Restart? No- No i will not allow myself i've come too far--We've come too far. But--What if?
My downfall. The reason I can't move forward. The reason for my doubts. The reason? Is you.
Difficult this has been. We've come so far only to be handed this obstacle-- The obstacle,
If not taken care of properly will determine our future--
The future we planned from the start-- Where it began--
The promises we made each other--
The key. The key is strength.
If not strong, it will not last.
Not because we don't love each other.
But, because of you.

Comments and Critic is welcome!

-LadyE =]


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Post by Lover Wed Dec 01, 2010 12:31 am

This is really good! (:
You never told me you wrote poetry!!!
Is the "you" not a specific person or what?
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Post by LadyE Wed Dec 01, 2010 10:19 pm

Thank you so much, I try Smile


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Post by Lover Thu Dec 02, 2010 6:50 pm

Sure
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Post by Ventus Fri Dec 03, 2010 7:09 pm

You really like writing about your boy eh E?

Wink

but your really talented at this shit. It really flows and i like your style.

Keep it up.
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